Our simple sentence was: My bike is red.
Check out our awesome new sentences we made from the original simple one.
Monday, 11 February 2013
Show Don't Tell
Today we were concentrating on painting a picture in the readers mind about what we were thinking. We got given a sentence that was really simple and we had to add more exciting words to improve it.
Our simple sentence was: My bike is red.
Check out our awesome new sentences we made from the original simple one.
Our simple sentence was: My bike is red.
Check out our awesome new sentences we made from the original simple one.
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Nice extensions to the red bike sentence Room 4. Well done. Colleen
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