Thursday, 7 March 2013

Bens Swimming sports memoir

"Ben Ben!!" Shirley-Anne shouted "we need a boy for the relay race".  "Why" I replied. "Just go and get changed". So I went and got changed. "Time for the year six relay race" Mr Fitness said through the microphone. That's me I said to my self. I'm third to swim in my team. Clap!!! Cole dived in. Splash (go cole go). I could hear lots of cheering (go bears go tigers go hawks go sharks). I got in position. I dived in. Splash I'm away. It's so cold, but I kept going. I made it. By Ben

2 comments:

  1. A great description of the whole relay race Ben. It's great to see you including some spoken text into your writing too.

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