I hopped in the pool it was freezing. I went under the water the water then we were off. I swam as fast as I could doing freestyle. I was ripping through the water. Then I got to the end I was handed a stick. I went to get the points for the bears.
I really like your sentence "I was ripping through the water" it lets me know you were pushing your arms through the water as hard and as fast as you could.
I really like your sentence "I was ripping through the water" it lets me know you were pushing your arms through the water as hard and as fast as you could.
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