Thursday, 7 March 2013

Ishbel's swimming sports memoir

I jumped into the pool the freezing water trickles down my spine and makes me shiver. "SMACK!" Miss Cramond hits the two blocks together. I started my stroke remembering all my technique 1,2,3 breathe I said to myself. I touched the other side of the pool with my left hand to finish. "Yes I came third." I jumped out all fired up for my next event. By Ishbel
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  1. Unknown7 March 2013 at 16:20

    Great start to your story Ishbel. The adjectives and verbs you have used creates a clear picture in my mind about the pools temperature.

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  2. Miss Cramond12 March 2013 at 19:50

    You have included lots of your thoughts and feelings by carefully selecting interesting words. Well done.

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