Thursday, 7 March 2013

Lucy's Swimming Memoir

I got ready to dive I was shivering. Miss Cramond said "take your marks". Clap! I dived in. Parents were yelling and people were calling my house team. I was thinking I've got to get in the top three. My heart was thumping I had just done my tumble turn. My legs were extremely sore. I'm half way, I can do this. I was nearly at the wall, touch, I finished. I was huffing and puffing. I came third I got my goal. I got points for my house team, I was really happy.

1 comment:

  1. Wow you have used lots of exciting verbs to "paint a picture" in my mind of how you were feeling during your race.

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