"Number 7 year 5 and 6 girls' Mr Fitness yelled out to the children . "Oh no is that my number? I don't feel very well now but its ok it will be over soon." But it felt like forever when I got in the pool . When
we started everyone sped past me. A few seconds later I was miles behind, but that was for a really good reason, because my legs were getting tired from kicking a lot, maybe I didn't keep my legs straight.
I like the way you have used lots of description to explain how you felt during your race.
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