Thursday, 14 March 2013

Swimming memoir By Sheng-jer

On my second race I felt nervous because it was really cold and it felt like I am in a iceberg.When Miss Cramond went bang with the wood I felt very nervous but I still tryed. So then after I stop floating so then I came second on the second race.Then I went to Mrs fisher.
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  1. Unknown15 March 2013 at 14:23

    Well done for giving it your best, Sheng-jer.

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  2. Miss McKinnon21 March 2013 at 19:34

    I like the way that you have included why you were feeling nervous Sheng-jer. This has added more detail to your writing.

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