When I sat on the plastic coloured seat my whole body started to shake and my lips trembled. "There's no going back now"said my mum. I put the tight belt on. What if I fall? Bad thoughts started to surround my brain. Before I even noticed "screech! " the crank turned sideways. I closed my eyes tightly and sweat came dripping down my forehead. "Ahh! "I screamed and nearly lost my voice. I don't like the loops and going upside down. I waited for it to stop. "Roller-coasters are freaky" I murmured.
This changed me because now I'm more confident going on rides .
Nice describing because instead of saying said you said murmured. Jovan Rm 24
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