Tuesday, 25 June 2013

Persuasive writing By Elin

Pets should be allowed at school. I think that's a bad idea. There were 3 reasons why I think this. They are some pets could have fleas,some go to the toilet any where and some would fight each other. 

First idea- Every one knows most of the animals living in the wild also have fleas by living in the wild. Same with our pets, they can have fleas too! If someone bring a pet has fleas and he or she takes to school the fleas will jump on another animal or human. At last there might be a flood of people with fleas on their head! So if that going to happen what can we do? 

Second idea- Pets can go toilet any where,some of the pets know where they allowed to go toilet. If the pets was allowed at school, they might go to the toilet on the worksheet or on someone's school bag ,chair,desk floor or books. It will make our school very dirty and give the cleaner harder work. At last ,if the thing gets out of the control ,the school might be smelly and dirty and no one will want to the school. 

Third idea-pets can fight each other. Pets are wild creatures. They all have enemies and if some one brings a dog some one brings a cat and some one brings a mice and the dog might chase the cat and the cat might caught the mice and going to the vet and pets cost more money than humans.   

Thank you for listening my opinion pets should not be allowed at school. Hope you agree with me.

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