Wednesday, 3 July 2013

Persuasive writing Cell Phones should be allowed at school by Leyi

                                                                            Introduction
Cell phones should not be allowed at school . I think it is not a good idea .  There are three reasons why I think this they are : it's not good looking at the screen for a long time , you might cheat on a test and children text their parents and say they are sick fake and they might pick them up early.

It's not good looking at the screen for a long time.It  will  make  your eyes not good and you will have to wear glasses. This bad because you might  have lots of cool games. You will play them lots of times trying to win, and not concentrating in class, so you won't be knowing the things you will be doing when the teacher tells you to do it.

You might cheat on a test,  this is this is not good because you can get them all right and the the teacher might put you in a higher group and you will have hard work. If you did it fast and have neat hand writing some children might not know it and want you to do it for them. The teacher might pick you to tell the whole class how you did it all right, you might be shy and don't want anybody know you cheat. You just come from a different country, and cannot speak their language well then your mum says you can't use the phone to take it to school, the teacher will think you are great at English.

Children can text their parents and say they are fake/sick and pick them up early. You won't know what you are doing the day we did it, it might be for a very important test.You might say school is finishing early and some people are staying at school. You can text to your mum or dad so we can go home at 10:00 or 10:30 and your mum and dad might not know you don't want to go to school.Maybe they might not be able to pick you up.

                                                                   Conclusion
This is why I think that is not a good idea bringing a cell phone to school. I hope you agree with my opinion. I am sure there are many other reasons why this is a bad idea.Don't let this happen.  

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