I was on the bars looking down at the ground I was going to do a trick. I was going to do it but my friend told me not to do it with my jersey on. So I went to place my hands on the bar. But I didn't get my hands on the bar. So I fell off. All I saw was black. Then I could see. I was still on the playground. My friend Dylan said I was knocked out. This changed me because now I am careful on bars.
I like the structure you have used in this piece, Nate. A great effort.
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